Today in class, we worked on revising the rough drafts of your essays on choice and personal responsibility. Here is the handout with the strategies that we discussed:

Revision Handout

Please make sure that you’ve marked up the changes that you are going to make on your final draft – I’ll give you a chance to write that tomorrow. (However, that should not be a time-intensive process – you should come to class with all of the changes you know you need to make on your paper. Basically, you should just take 15 or 20 minutes to write the final essay nicely on a new sheet.)

Homework for tonight is the next reading guide for ICB:

Reading Guide – Pages 77-100

As I have mentioned in class, I’ll be a doctor’s appointment in the morning, so I won’t see periods 1, 3, and 4 until Friday. Everyone, if you would like to bring headphones or earbuds, your assignment after you are finished with your final draft and your homework will be to listen to a podcast. (And I’ll also let you listen to music as you write your final draft.)